Romance

LOST MELODY

by

DOLORES MARONEY

 

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GENRE: Contemporary Romance

THE BLURB:

Out of sight, out of mind. That’s what Melody Ravenswood was counting on when she invented a new life for herself as Mel Harper in the small farming community of Willowbrook, Texas. She could be herself, whoever that was. Having long since lost her identity to being the only child and sole beneficiary of a legendary rock and roller, she was finally going to live the normal life she craved – a job, a house, friends and no paparazzi.

Hank Travis is the last thing Mel needs in her new life. The local boy turned rock and roll star’s sexy, won’t take no for an answer pursuit makes her long for a life she has only dreamed of. Before Mel can have the future she wants with Hank, she must confront her past and find the Melody she lost along the way.

THE REVIEW:

Mel Harper wants to reinvent herself, hoping that a new job as a reporter for a small time paper in a neighborly Texas town will be enough to keep inquisitive eyes away from her and the past that still haunts her dreams.

Hank Travis is the creative force and drummer for BlackWing, back home in that same Texas town,  making preparations for cutting a Ravenswood cover CD.

Mel has a rule: no involvement with musicians, period—a mantra hammered into her by her mother ever since the day her father died in a plane crash on his way to celebrate her tenth birthday. And as children do, that young girl carries the burden of guilt knowing that the father she adored would not have died but for his determination to be with her on that special day.

Hank has a rule: no involvement with reporters, ever. He spends half his year in the spotlight, hounded by paparazzi and Hank sees them as worse than out-of-control fans or stalkers.

When Mel shows up on Hank’s door for an interview with Henry Travis, who turns out to be Hank’s dad, that little mix-up has consequences that neither Mel nor Hank can ignore. The attraction is immediate and compelling. But as these things go, the road to true love isn’t just pot-holed, it’s cratered and lined with razor blades.

Hank is convinced Mel’s the one for him (even after he finds out who she really is), the woman who will be his hearth and home, giving him the kids and the stability he so desperately needs in his insane creative world. So he issues a challenge, agreeing to give her the interview of the decade, if she’ll devote a month to the assignment. Hank is certain he can bring Mel around to his way of thinking.

Were it that easy…

There’s the matter of a song and reminders that Ravenswood was her father’s creative legacy and bitter memories hammered into her by a mother with an agenda that only unfolds slowly as the young woman comes to grips with her own legacy, her untapped talent and her confused feelings about a modern music legend.

The central love story has many hills and valleys, not much runs smoothly for Mel and Hank and there are more reasons for them to be apart than to be together, especially for Mel who has far more baggage to handle than Hank.

The point of view toggles between both characters and the author does a credible job giving each one a unique voice. For me, I had issues with Mel—in that, get over yourself girl, wake up and smell the platinum record way. Mel insists on finding herself at the expense of Hank’s feelings. I had a vibe of self-serving reticence that removed a few ticks on the sympathetic character ledger.

Hank, on the other hand, was spot on with how he felt and the way he dug in and kept promises (mostly, again there’s that song thing but most readers will be in a forgiving mood, I certainly was). What I especially liked with this character was the journey he took: looking at who he was, what he loved, what he needed to do with his life, and the kinds of sacrifices he was finally prepared to make to have what mattered most.

Mel … not so much. Yes, she makes sacrifices on her own convoluted emotional journey but they seemed, to this reader, less authentic.

Oh alright, I liked Hank way better, sue me.

The details about the music industry, recording sessions in particular, seemed quite authentic and added tremendously to the story. The author is an excellent storyteller, adept at keeping to the core romance genre framework. I found quite a few content errors (typos, missing/extra words) so this could use another hard edit to bring it up to specs. I’d also pare down Mel’s emotional journey because it became a little repetitious. That might go a long way to bringing her character up to more ‘sympathetic/likable’ standards (your mileage may vary).

For those reasons, I’m giving it four stars. That makes this a solid romance read.

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4 responses to “Romance

  1. Super, Diane. You make me want to read this one. Never have been able to turn my back on a heart-stopper, whopper.

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